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zayd_akon
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| Fri Apr 06, 2007 2:08 pm Dragonball of the world(Goku's life) |
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Chapter 1:
It was the Martial Arts tournament in the spring season. Goku and the gang meet a realy evil deamon called "Picollo". He was the son of Picollo the ruled of the world. He was dead after he was killed by Goku. Then the World Martial Arts is going to begein in 1 more hour. Then they here a sound "ttttteeeeeeennnnngggggg" the Martial Arts has begein. The first one is Goku vs King Kappa. And the fight begein Goku slowly walked to Kappa and very fast. he chop he's neck. He was injert in the match. And Goku wins the match. And know its Krullin's turn.
....................................TO BE CONTINUED............................................ |
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Icicle
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| Sat Apr 07, 2007 6:21 am |
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| Ok.. put in more dialogs ok? |
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celebritytalker
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| Sat Apr 07, 2007 9:00 am |
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| I agree. LOL! |
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alia_pika2497
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| Sat Apr 07, 2007 1:33 pm |
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| hey did u copy this from dragonball....??? and this is a great story :D :D |
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zayd_akon
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| Sun Apr 08, 2007 1:35 pm |
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| Thx.....Ill do the next chapter after school tomorrow. Agree??? |
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zayd_akon
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| Tue Apr 10, 2007 1:10 pm |
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Chapter 2:
It has start to be Krullin"s turn.
He"s going to fight "Tao Pie Pie"
He is killed by Goku but peaple make him to a half Cyborg.
"hahahahahaha" now I am powerful to beet everyone Tao Pie Pie said.
Goku said, Its ok i"ll kill him again when he wins. When he lose, he will kill Tao Pie Pie after the Martial Arts. Goku keeps a secret to Master Roshi.
Master Roshi was teaching Goku and Krullin when they are small.
Goku met Master Roshi when he went to a a small island. Goku said "Who are you?" and so on.
And it already started. Tao pie pie go to Krullin and punch him at the stomach. And Krullin was very painfull and try to hit Tao pie pie. He attack Tao pie pie at ring out. And Krullin won the match. Everyone Cheerd for him. At the match begein in 1 more hour.
..............................................................TO BE CONTINUED......................................................................................... |
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zayd_akon
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| Tue Apr 10, 2007 1:11 pm |
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| Do u guys like it??????? |
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celebritytalker
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| Thu Apr 12, 2007 8:40 pm |
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| GO GO KRULLIN :!: :!: LOL |
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zayd_akon
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| Fri Apr 13, 2007 1:49 pm |
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| lol... Krullin is good |
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celebritytalker
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| Fri Apr 13, 2007 2:27 pm |
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| I know lol |
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Icicle
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| Sat Apr 21, 2007 11:46 am |
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| lol.. this is just like the story!!!! |
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zayd_akon
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| Sun Apr 22, 2007 8:10 am |
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| sorry I cannot do the next chapter bec at 23 I have exam so I need to study |
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Icicle
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| Sun May 06, 2007 6:18 am |
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| Exam's over |
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celebritytalker
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| Sun May 06, 2007 9:49 am |
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| LO. Do the next chapter now. |
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Icicle
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| Mon May 07, 2007 11:30 am |
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| YEAH lol.. |
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